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This is fun! Love the exploration of chords and odd melodies.

I did find it a little hard to follow, and my advice would be to work towards a stronger sense of direction in both writing and mixing.

Writing-wise, the song doesn't seem to move between states, e.g. loud/quiet, simple/complex, but kinda stays in a place of fun chaos. The chords also bounce around a little aimlessly. Once the drums started changing up in the second half I was really starting to get lost.

Mixing-wise, there's not really anything in front for us to focus on -- all the elements, especially the flute/keys and slap bass, are in the front competing for attention. If the flute is the main focus for a section, the slap bass can ride quieter in the back and still be fun.

Just my two cents -- and all those little issues come about because of the fun you're having and the interesting stuff you're exploring! Keep at it!

Burner98 responds:

Thank you very much for your comment, your criticism is much appreciated ! =]

~Burner

Love this

Whole album is a joy

Like the experimentation in this one, fun and flexible

Everybody voting less than 5 on this is a Devin.

ninjamuffin99 responds:

on god

Thriftman responds:

fr fr

Your passion and vulnerability are what makes you a truly great artist. Heavy kudos for this one.

Troisnyx responds:

Aaaaaa 😭💖 That's incredibly high praise. Thank you so much.

Well this is cute AF.

Vista-Sound13 responds:

Well, that was very nice to hear, indeed! I am glad you liked this track, so thank you, buddy!

Oh dang, this is really good. This is done on a Switch?? I gotta look up Korg Gadget. It sounds like you played this live!

ThatAndyGuy responds:

Hey, thanks! And yes please look it up! The more people on gadget, the better!

I paid my power bill while listening to this

Having Troisnyx as your first guest is a podcast rite of passage!

AkioDaku responds:

I know right, I feel very lucky. Plus I feel like she carried the entire thing, 😅 I'm still in awe of how well she speaks.

Troisnyx responds:

Ah yes, I fondly remember Grounds Patrol. ^_^

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